Flash Fiction

Fugue No. 1

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1 Comment 20 September 2011

SUBJECT

Antonia was running. Johan chased her.

 

DEVELOPMENT

- Antonia was running along a dried out riverbed. She ran over stones of every size and shape, slipping on drifts of pebbles, skipping rocks, and clambering boulders. Johan trailed her from the air, his eyes running over these stones, and pebbles, and rocks, and boulders.

- As Antonia was running, she realised it had always been thus; she ran, Johan chased. Along pried out streams of consciousness, over stories of every size and form, tripping on shifts of meaning, the ticking clocks, the clamouring elders.

 

RECAPITULATION

Every time he was just about to catch her, they began again. But roles had been reversed. Johan ruined, Antonia chaste. He would never catch her. She would be forever alone. Tired out. With only reams of stories left, sifted for meaning, stammering, elderly. Antonia was running away from herself. And Johan chased her there.

 

 

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Simon Kearns grew up in the North of Ireland and currently lives in the South of France. His debut novel, Virtual Assassin, explores personal responsibility in a corrupt society. His next will be published in Spring 2012. He enjoys flash fiction as a means of experimentation - examples can be found at spiralise.blogspot.com

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