Poetry

Shrines

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3 Comments 31 July 2012

Wasps have begun

to build a small comb

no more than eight holes

in its ash-walled exterior so far,

a little set of mummified volcanoes

right at the apex of the canvas umbrella

I put up to separate some of the porch from sun.

 

So far I’ve seen two

sort of whizzing around

from time to time but mostly

just crouching on top of their mound

surprisingly still for beings who own flight,

bodies too often like mini sausage links, side by side,

stretching antennae, legs, wings from the nest up to the sky.

 

I know I should

get rid of their nest while

it is still small and they are only two

but instead, I find myself spending time

watching them hang at that impossible angle,

upside down, twin Michelangelos set to work. I wonder

if they sense me there at all, beneath their empire, contemplating their demise.

 

I wonder whether one

or both would charge if I knocked

their house down, wonder if we could

possibly live sting-free, neighbors behaving

neighborly. I wonder what do wasps eat to stay alive.

Do they talk to each other, do they make plans, strategize?

And just how big will this monument be if I don’t decide otherwise.

 

I can’t help but ask myself, when baby wasps come, will they be grateful

to their God, and if so, how long will that gratitude last if they are allowed to thrive?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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3 Comments so far

  1. Gigi says:

    Mo-nique…I am always so impressed with the content of your writing! You bring such wonderful stories to life! Thank you! xoxo

  2. Dominica says:

    Monique-fantastic. Thanks for sharing. You made me see and wonder too!

  3. Denise says:

    Monique….Wonderful!!! I never looked at it that way. What insight. I think I even understand what you are talking about! HAHA


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