Frost glittered on the branches. Later there would be a thaw, but right now it was ice crystals like fur on the windows and matted grass and telephone lines and poles. Ice zinged on the air, stung the skin like a lasso.
The snow man lumbered out of the yard, but he was slow and balloony, so we could run away: we were not afraid of him. We were young at the time. The ice knives, well, they were dangerous, and they were aimed at us. We are few. They are the ice foe.
We set water to boiling. If they climbed over the stockade or pelted us with diseased carcasses, we’d be ready. But the diseased carcasses clinked, shattered, and melted. They vanished before our eyes. We did not know what to think.
One of us said we should place a rug on the puddle but it soaked through; another of us said we should sop it up with a towel, wring it out into a goblet, consume the foe’s strength and seductiveness.
We sipped from the goblet. One of us was the first to be transformed into the wind and ice, and we poured water on that one, then stopped and shaped the ice into a sculpture of a flame. But there was no heat, of course. One of us became an ice matchstick, and another of us an ice candle. These melted too. We are fewer now. We sit with our hands folded; we wait for the next thing.
Photo: “Horror” by Dave Durden
OMG! Brilliant job, Cezarija. Please, don’t tell anyone, but when the first paragraph was over I realized I was crying. It took me at least a couple of minutes before I could resume reading. Brava! Thank you for that.
What a beautiful and chilling photograph! Thank you, Dave.
Wonderful, Cezarija – you’ve truly captured the essence of a troubling emotion. Great job!
vivid imagery, emotion, even sound, scent, and taste, all packed into this compressed story. well done.
Lovely, spooky, sneakily desperate, haunting.
Hmmm …If republished, consider replacing ‘lasso.’ To my ears,’lasso’ is round and curvey and whirley … the word does not set well here for me.
Like an strange child’s story, utterly compelling. Brava!
Cezarija, well done! One of the strengths of this flash is its poetry. (But I do agree with Meigs, I had the same reaction to “lasso,” perhaps “whip” would be better or even omit the simile.)
Beautiful and moving. A metaphor for humanity’s fears and anxieties. Thank you.